tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post236116469868631150..comments2023-09-27T06:33:50.602-05:00Comments on The Writing Game: We Listen to Your WishesJenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02362687820368214420noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-2849251307458575472008-02-01T12:39:00.000-05:002008-02-01T12:39:00.000-05:00This was just a brilliant story! I cried at the e...This was just a brilliant story! I cried at the end!!! It was truly unique. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-9135270835893669882008-02-01T03:15:00.000-05:002008-02-01T03:15:00.000-05:00Awww, what a heartwarming story. Sign me up for th...Awww, what a heartwarming story. Sign me up for the Chills at the End club. I especially loved these lines near the end: "She stopped dreaming about meeting the perfect strangers in far-away lands. She pulled close the strangers in her house." You did an excellent job of relating theme in this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-85081431390604745662008-01-31T21:32:00.000-05:002008-01-31T21:32:00.000-05:00I just got right into this with "Crow" narrating, ...I just got right into this with "Crow" narrating, and had no problem accepting the premise--and it is so true--dogs can get people to move in ways another human couldn't get them to do.<BR/><BR/>And I thought the ending was great--just fit. Like any true spirit helper, got in, planted the seed, gave little "assists" and then got out of the way. Just the right amount of everything to make a balanced tale.Wholly Burblehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999272388164733321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-91571414179234864102008-01-31T18:21:00.000-05:002008-01-31T18:21:00.000-05:00This was a great story. Your guidelines were not e...This was a great story. Your guidelines were not easy!nyc/caribbean ragazzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09370358466131415888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-39286807144995277372008-01-31T17:34:00.000-05:002008-01-31T17:34:00.000-05:00Awww, so sad. The ending is great!Awww, so sad. The ending is great!Luisa Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15310698422276446909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-10892588435395580532008-01-31T15:03:00.000-05:002008-01-31T15:03:00.000-05:00This is beautiful! So tender! Wow, I am in awe!This is beautiful! So tender! Wow, I am in awe!annohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05102616203481686227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-80019205889052294392008-01-31T14:11:00.000-05:002008-01-31T14:11:00.000-05:00What a great idea and so well done. I can see how...What a great idea and so well done. I can see how it took you out of your comfort zone, but you really handled it wonderfully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-30058583523520053812008-01-31T13:46:00.000-05:002008-01-31T13:46:00.000-05:00wow... that was just beautiful! You are sooo talen...wow... that was just beautiful! You are sooo talented!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-74693326302473220702008-01-31T12:33:00.000-05:002008-01-31T12:33:00.000-05:00I took chills at the end too. This is just gorgeou...I took chills at the end too. This is just gorgeous. I think I want a black lab named Crow, very much.Jenn in Hollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02356887577439040747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-19003946297663805332008-01-31T08:20:00.000-05:002008-01-31T08:20:00.000-05:00I LOVED this! Wooooohoooo! Great story. Crow wa...I LOVED this! Wooooohoooo! Great story. Crow was such a sweetie, and I actually got teary when she ran in front of the car. And the ending gave me chills. GREAT stuff!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02362687820368214420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3630050543872105809.post-66557893293172363592008-01-31T04:39:00.000-05:002008-01-31T04:39:00.000-05:00Like I said on your blog - absolutely loved it.Like I said on your blog - absolutely loved it.Madam Crunchypantshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11105080184570652882noreply@blogger.com